Assignment 22 - Elevator Pitch No. 3
1) The pitch
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yVemvdrGHQI
2) A reflection on the feedback I received from my last pitch
What stood out to me as important when reviewing the feedback from my previous elevator pitch was what the viewers of my blog liked about the pitch. Because the pitch had to be cut down from 90 to 60 seconds I had to remove some material from the pitch. Their comments let me know that I should keep my hook and details about the product in my pitch.
3) What did I change based on feedback?
What I changed based on feedback was the content of my pitch. As stated above, the comments gave me knowledge of what made the pitch good. I kept the parts that elevated the pitch, and discarded details that were not crucial. Additionally, I practiced the pitch a number of times in order to insure that I would be as calm as possible. My calmness is something that a viewer of the blog noted as something they liked.
1) The pitch
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yVemvdrGHQI
2) A reflection on the feedback I received from my last pitch
What stood out to me as important when reviewing the feedback from my previous elevator pitch was what the viewers of my blog liked about the pitch. Because the pitch had to be cut down from 90 to 60 seconds I had to remove some material from the pitch. Their comments let me know that I should keep my hook and details about the product in my pitch.
3) What did I change based on feedback?
What I changed based on feedback was the content of my pitch. As stated above, the comments gave me knowledge of what made the pitch good. I kept the parts that elevated the pitch, and discarded details that were not crucial. Additionally, I practiced the pitch a number of times in order to insure that I would be as calm as possible. My calmness is something that a viewer of the blog noted as something they liked.
Alex,
ReplyDeleteYour pitch was very professional. I watched your last one as well and I thought you kept it very concise with all of the relevant information that you needed. The attachable desk would be useful for a classroom environment.
Great job this week. Your confidence shows throughout your pitch and it makes your opportunity more attractive to consumers.
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